Insights archive

Red Pony is a team of writers, editors, Microsoft Office template developers and communications trainers. We have been writing about our areas of expertise since 2009 in our Red Pony Express newsletter.

This collection features a selection of our best articles.

Editing Peter Riches Editing Peter Riches

Why I won’t be reading ‘Go Set a Watchman’

A little while back I was chatting to another dad at a children’s birthday party. He was telling me how he’d just bought a copy of Harper Lee’s new novel, Go Set a Watchman. Angelo talked of his anticipation of re-entering the fictional world of Maycomb County, having greatly enjoyed Harper Lee’s first and, until very recently, only published novel, To Kill a Mockingbird, as a teenager.

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Grammar tips, English language Belinda Nemec Grammar tips, English language Belinda Nemec

Barbarous mutilations

This brings us to the thorny matter of punctuation. All these abbreviations lost their full stop long ago. Even some relatively new ones, like app for application, are allowed to stand alone (and obviously, using full stops when tweeting and texting would defeat the purpose of the abbreviations that have developed, if u c wot I mean. But in formal text, what is the convention for punctuating words that still feel like abbreviations?

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Tendering Peter Riches Tendering Peter Riches

Are you tender-ready?

If you’ve ever responded to a request for tender (or RFT), you will know just how arduous the process can be. While the rewards for a successful submission are significant, the job of responding to a long list of complex requirements within a short timeframe puts many off before they start.

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Business communications, Copywriting Belinda Nemec Business communications, Copywriting Belinda Nemec

The music of words

Most business writing is read silently by individuals. Spoken texts delivered to groups of listeners, such as speeches and conference papers, form only a fraction of the millions of sentences produced in workplaces every day. Nevertheless, the way a text ‘sounds’, even in the reader’s head, can help or hinder delivery of the intended message.

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Grammar tips, Plain English writing Belinda Nemec Grammar tips, Plain English writing Belinda Nemec

Beware the dangling modifier

What’s wrong with these sentences?

Yesterday, after conferring with my senior national security advisers and following extensive consultations with our coalition partners, Saddam Hussein was given one last chance. (President Bush in the Chicago Tribune, 1991)

Driving home recently, a thick pall of smoke turned out to be Deepak’s bungalow, well alight.

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